You know how a
teddy bear is a
kid's favorite thing?
Well IT was my
favorite thing
IT and I were always together
IT was always there for me
comforting me
and making me laugh
But one day
IT
disappeared
I didn't know what
I did
or
what I said
I called IT
and yelled for IT
But IT
never came
IT never heard me
IT wasn't coming back
So I gave up
and I stopped
yelling for IT
and calling for IT
I just stopped
IT had already
disappeared
gone
vanished
just
like
that
This is really deep. I feel connected to this poem since IT could be anything. I like that you don't mention what IT is, even at the end of the poem. It could be anyone( but no one is a thing or an object as a matter of a fact!) or it could be anything. I really Love this!
ReplyDeleteI love your post. The feelings you putted into this got my attention the most though. This poem actually gave me that same feeling that you had while you wrote this, and that you also had towards IT. I like how you never gave away what IT was.
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